Re: Max and Ruby Albert

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this story is "Ruby's Merit Badge."

Ruby and her friend took care of were taking care of the dolls as part of their Bunny Scouts camp homework. Ruby cooled down the doll's fever. She also warmed the doll and healed the doll's legs. But the bandage was too big for the doll. So Ruby and her friend bandaged Max instead. With all the bandages on, they out went out to greet the Bunny Scout leader. In the meantime, Max was trying to get the ice cream out. Max finally took it out, but the toy took carried it away. Max chased after the toy, and the bandages were all released and wrapped around the table. But the leader told Ruby that it was incredible and give gave her the badge.

I think Ruby has good luck!

Score: B

Tips:

• Add more details about how Ruby felt when she received the badge.
• Explain why the Bunny Scout leader thought Ruby's work was incredible.
• Reflect on the lesson Ruby learned from this experience.
• Ensure proper verb forms and tense consistency (e.g., "gave" instead of "give").
• Use appropriate sentence structure and word choice for clarity (e.g., "went out" instead of "out" and "carried it away" instead of "took it away").
• Maintain consistent pronoun usage and clarity in descriptions (e.g., "the doll's legs" instead of "doll's legs").