<p><b>Caillou Goes to Work</b></p><p>He <s>was going to go</s> <b>went</b> to work with his mom.</p><p>Caillou <s>is waiting</s> <b>waited for the</b> elevator with his mom.</p><p><s>The</s> <b>There were</b> lots of people in the elevator.</p><p>Caillou <s>Looked</s> <b>looked at his</b> mom's <s>office room</s> <b>office.</b></p><p>Caillou thought <s>a working write a paper</s> <b>working meant writing on paper.</b></p><p>Caillou <s>draw</s> <b>drew</b> his family on <b>a</b> paper.</p><p>Caillou felt <s>boring</s> <b>bored.</b></p><p>Caillou ate <s>hambgers</s> <b>hamburgers</b> and some snacks.</p><p>Caillou's <s>fater take a he</s> <b>father picked him up.</b></p><p>Caillou <s>said about working all at</s> <b>told his dad all about his day at work.</b></p><hr data-ke-style="style1"><p><b>Final Score: B+</b> <b>Tips for Improvement:</b></p><ol style="list-style-type: decimal;" data-ke-list-type="decimal"><li><p><b>Verb Tenses:</b></p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li>"Caillou is waiting" → <b>"Caillou waited"</b> (past tense needed)</li><li>"Caillou draw his family" → <b>"Caillou drew his family"</b> ("draw" ❌ → "drew" ✅)</li><li>"Caillou felt boring" → <b>"Caillou felt bored"</b> ("boring" is for things, "bored" is for people)</li></ul></li><li><p><b>Sentence Structure:</b></p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li>"The lots of people in the elevator" → <b>"There were lots of people in the elevator."</b> (Fix sentence flow)</li><li>"Caillou's fater take a he" → <b>"Caillou's father picked him up."</b> (Correct phrasing)</li><li>"Caillou said about working all at" → <b>"Caillou told his dad all about his day at work."</b> (Better sentence structure)</li></ul></li></ol><hr data-ke-style="style1">
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