Re: 1C 209 summary (Yulia)

[Teacher1]

The title of this book is Milly, Molly and Aunt Maude. Aunt Maude hu̲r̲ted hurt her leg in her garden. So Doctor Smiley helped Aunt Maude feel better after six weeks. Milly and Molly would take care of her garden for Aunt Maude. Milly and Molly suggested knitting to Aunt Maude. So Aunt Maude started knitting. Now six weeks are up but Aunt Maude was not ready. So Aunt Maude made many blankets. Then it sn̲o̲w snowed, Milly and Molly tried to save the vegetable garden. Aunt Maude gave blankets to people. Finally, Aunt Maude was ready. So Aunt Maude went to her vegetable garden.

Score: B+

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