Re:<단어 20개> 틀린 부분 수정과 영작 부탁드립니다...^^

< 영작하신거 뜻을 이해하는데 어려움이 있었읍니다. > 이 정도면 끝말잇기 더 하셔야 합니다. 끝말잇기 적게 하시면 반만 도와드립니다. 담부턴 참고하세요. 면접보러 들어가서 '1번 말씀드리겠습니다'...이런거 어떻게 말해야 하나요? [ I would like to give my response on the question number one. ] 1. 나에게 영향을 준 선생님에 대해 이야기하고 어떤 점에서 영향을 주었는지 이야기하시오. (이 문제 문장을 영어로 좀 바꿔주세요..ㅠㅠ) [ Talk about your teacher who gave you the positive influences and explain what kind of specific influences your teacher had on you. ] There is just one teacher that I has really respected to this day. ( I have one teacher who I respect the most until this day.) She was a science teacher When I was a first grade student of middle school. (She was my science teacher when I was the first grade in the the middle school.) Also that school is first to her. So she seemed to got a lot of go teaching and everything. (In addition, this was the first time teaching experience for her. Thus, it seemed to me that she had lot of confidence about teaching the student.) Needless to say, she had passionate to all student. (Needless to say, she had lot of passions towards all her student.) She treated students impartially. Until then I was a normal student especially grades and I'm net interested in that and entering the university as well as. (She treated all her students impartially. At that time, I was a normal student in terms of receiving the grade and having the desire for entering the university for my future.) But she had been always concerned about me and talked about my succeeded future or her youth. (However, she has helped me in many ways by showing the concern and careness for me. In addition, she often gave me the advice for me to succeed in my future by telling me her personal experience when she was young.) And how to study and how to be a teacher. I had begun studying because I was thinking about my future little by little and I didn't want to disappoint her. (She instructed me the proper ways to study and how to become the teacher. This inspired me to concentrate myself in studying and think about my future little by little. Most importantly, I did not want to let her down.) Eventually that makes me where I am and who wants to be a teacher like her. (Consequently, this incident influenced me and led me to become who I am right now and have the ambition of becoming the teacher.) 2. 교사가 되서 하고 싶은 것을 3가지 말하시오. (이 문제 문장도 영어로 좀....ㅠㅠ) (Talk about three things that you want to accomplish by becoming the teacher.) I have so many things I want to do. First, I want to leave travel. (leaving is WRONG EXPRESSION‎) (There are many things that I like to do. First, I want to have the opportunity to travel the world.) I do not know the world yet. And it is more that I do not experience yet. (Also, there are many things that I don't know about this world and I want to have the chance to experience the things that I never had the chance to experience before.) So, because leaving travel, I want to experience and see little more many things. (leaving IS WRONG EXPRESSION‎) (By having the opportunity to travel the world, I would like to use this opportunity to acquire the new experiences by seeing and doing the things.) By next time, I like all kind of sports, especially the art of fencing or swimming are what I have wanted to learn for a long time. (For my hobbies, I like all kinds of sports. For example, I like the art of fencing or swimming because these are the kind of activities that I wanted to do it fot a long time.) I suppose that it's really good for our health by spending free time with swimming or jogging or something like that. (In my opinion, I believe that doing kind of sport activities during the spare time is very helpful for maintaining the healthy body.) 마지막으로 가장 하고 싶은 것은 생활지도 및 상담에 관한 연구이다. (The last thing that I want to do is doing the research about giving the guidance about live the proper life with giving the counseling.) 교사가 되서 아이들을 가르치는 중에 가장 힘든 부분이 생활지도라고 생각한다. (I think that one of the most difficult thing to do my becoming the teacher is to help guiding the students to the right path in terms of living the proper life.) 아이들을 좀 더 잘 파악하고 그 아이에게 맞는 학습을 하기 위해서는 아이들의 상황을 정확히 파악해야 한다. 이를 위해 많은 연구를 하고 싶다. (It is necessary to figure out the children's situation precisely in order to understand them better and give them the learning that goes along with their situation. Thus, I would like to focus my research on determining these issues.)