Hi Jay.
Thank you for take Deukum class and I am happy to see you in the class again.
In this presentation, there are several things you need to change for the better.
First of all, you made small mistakes: (please these words at M-W.com)
Works( you said ‘worked’)
Aid(it is not three syllable like 에.이.드)
System(different stress)
Furnace, relied
Second, you used your mouth inefficiently. You are tried to open your wide but it is incorrect.
Try to use your mouth properly rather than just open widely and horizontally.
For the better presentation, try to read a book slowly so that you can feel proper position of your tongue.
And plus, please listen to the same audio file 35 times more upon check my comments. It will positively affect for your study.
Lastly, since you deliver the story of Kudle three times, I hope you next week deliver another story with intro.
Thank you for make a presentation again.
If you cannot understand or confused, feel free to come and ask me.