earth and mars steven

[student]

Do you see the small red dot shining inthe night sky? that is mars.
as you may know earth and mars are planet.
thenamenof earth and mars their name is greek mytholoy.
earth have one moon and mars have two.
these are only a few feature s of earth and mars
i think this book is intereting and i want to go mars.

[Teacher1]

Do you see the small red dot shining in̶ in the night sky? (T)hat is Mars.
(A)s you may know(,) (E)arth and Mars are planet̶ (planets).
(The) name̶ (names) of Earth and Mars (are from) (Greek mythology).
(E)arth ha̶v̶e̶ (has) one moon and Mars ha̶v̶e̶ (has) two.
(T)hese are only a few feature̶ s̶ (features) of Earth and Mars(.)

민성아 여기에 Earth 하고 Mars의 다른 특징들이 더 들어가면 좋겠어. (MonicaT)

(I) think this book is inter̶e̶t̶i̶n̶g̶ (interesting) and (I) want to go (to) Mars.