<p style="text-align: left;">The title of this book is "Earth and Mars". The main things are Earth and Mars. Do you see that small red dot tin the night sky? That's Mars. Mars and Earth have many similarties, but they are also have some difference. Most planets are named after Roman or Greek gods or goddeness. But! Earth is only not named after a god or goddeness. Its mean is simply "Soil". Earth and Mars orbit the Sun. Compared to Mars, Earth is closer to Sun and has a faster orbit speed. So,Mars is 687 Earth days lond, Earth is 365.25 days along. Mars size is half of Earth, and mass is 11 percent of Earth's mass. Mar's weigh is a third of gravity and weight on Earth. There are a few features of Earth and Mars. I think this book is interesting.</p>
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첫댓글The title of this book is "Earth and Mars". The main things are Earth and Mars. Do you see that small red dot t̶i̶n̶ in the night sky? That's Mars. Mars and Earth have many similart̶i̶e̶s̶ similarities, but they a̶r̶e̶ ̶a̶l̶s̶o̶ also have some difference̶s̶ differences. Most planets are named after Roman or Greek gods or godden̶e̶s̶s̶ goddesses. But! Earth is o̶n̶l̶y̶ the only planet not named after a god or godden̶e̶s̶s̶ goddess. Its mean̶ meaning is simply "Soil". Earth and Mars orbit the Sun. Compared to Mars, Earth is closer to the Sun and has a faster orbit̶ orbital speed.
So, Mars's year is 687 Earth days lon̶d̶ long, Earth's year is 365.25 days a̶l̶o̶n̶g̶ long. Mars's size is half of Earth's, and its mass is 11 percent of Earth's mass. Mar̶'̶s̶ Mars's weigh̶ weight is a third of (its) gravity and weight on Earth. These are a few features of Earth and Mars. I think this book is interesting.
Teacher's Thought Conclusion " I think this book is interesting " is too boring and doesn't match. How about changing it into "I found it interesting to learn about the differences between Earth and Mars. I would like to visit Mars someday."
첫댓글 The title of this book is "Earth and Mars". The main things are Earth and Mars. Do you see that small red dot t̶i̶n̶ in the night sky? That's Mars. Mars and Earth have many similart̶i̶e̶s̶ similarities, but they a̶r̶e̶ ̶a̶l̶s̶o̶ also have some difference̶s̶ differences. Most planets are named after Roman or Greek gods or godden̶e̶s̶s̶ goddesses. But! Earth is o̶n̶l̶y̶ the only planet not named after a god or godden̶e̶s̶s̶ goddess. Its mean̶ meaning is simply "Soil". Earth and Mars orbit the Sun. Compared to Mars, Earth is closer to the Sun and has a faster orbit̶ orbital speed.
So, Mars's year is 687 Earth days lon̶d̶ long, Earth's year is 365.25 days a̶l̶o̶n̶g̶ long. Mars's size is half of Earth's, and its mass is 11 percent of Earth's mass. Mar̶'̶s̶ Mars's weigh̶ weight is a third of (its) gravity and weight on Earth. These are a few features of Earth and Mars. I think this book is interesting.
Teacher's Thought
Conclusion " I think this book is interesting " is too boring and doesn't match.
How about changing it into "I found it interesting to learn about the differences between Earth and Mars. I would like to visit Mars someday."