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    This summer vacation was very special to me. There were two kind events, one was to take a supplement lesson, another was travel toward Jeju-island. But I' going to explain Jeju-island travel from this writing. I joined to the travel club at May. I traveled Jeju island from end to end with my travel club members. I travelled Jeju-do in 11days.

    First, I prepared  for going to Jeju-do. I prepared 3kg rice , side dish, some cloths, some towels and so on. 10 members gathered in the express bus terminal. We got on a bus and went toward Mokpo. We went aboard a ship that goes toward Jeju-do from Mokpo. All members were tired by reason of passing 11 hours. We arrived to Jeju-do lately at night. In order to make a retrenchment in the budget, we tried to hitchhike. But times were so late, everyone didn't giving a person a ride. To make us more miserable, it began to rain. Our baggages were so heavy. We were constrained to take taxies to go to destination. First destination was Iho beach. At that place we pitched two tents. Although we were so tired and hungry, made dinner ourself. Next day, for succeeding in hitchhike, we divided with 3 or 4 people. And finally we succeeded in hitchhike! We were so glad. The driver who is kind gave the watermelon to us. And we arrived at Hupjae beach. The sea water was warm and so clean. That Was a feeling in foreign countries. We swam in the ocean and photographed. There was a joyful day but the day when the rain comes was so difficult. When the rain comes we can't hitchhike. We travelled like this method. We saw 'sungsan ilchul bong' , went 'donneko valley' and 'wo island'.

    This travel was so hard to me. We had to pitch tents and make dinner ourself and move by hitchhike. But this travel will remain in my memory. It was difficult and hard but so exciting. Also the friendship became sincerely. I will not be the possibility of forgetting this travel.

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