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1.      Such a phenomenon is believed to result both merits and demerits, which this essay will explore.

2.      Studying at primary schools provide better quality of education as well as equip with advanced facilities so that students are often outperformed than students in public schools.

3.      Private schools usually impart distinctive education format, for instance, small group studying, and various leisure activities (swimming, hocking).

4.      Schools assist students to formulate their future career.

5.      Private schools often hire highly qualified teachers so they ensure student’s academic consolidation.

6.      Wearing school uniforms make students to lose personal identity as it emphasizing student’s homogeity.

7.      Private schools not only concentrating on teaching academic subjects, but also morality as a major subjects which help students to grow up as a courteous individual.

8.      Poor students are rejected by the private schools because of its exorbitantly high education costs.

9.      There are several ways to get out of these quandaries.

10.    Gap year allow students to obtain important life experience which cannot learn from normal education.

11.    Such work experience acquired from gap year will play an integral role when they are going to look for a job.

12.    In order for students to have a gap year, they need to postpone university course for one year.

13.    We all know that most young and innocent adolescents cannot make a sensible judgment, so they are more likely waste their valuable time while they are doing the gap year.

14.    Animal testing is ruthless for innocent animals.

15.    Without experiencing a gap year, students might demoralize after graduate the university as they never have chance to experience a real society.

16.    Gap years allow students to find out personal affection and strongpoint which help them to decide a major they are going to study.

17.    Students can discover what their real affinity is.

18.    Without the advancement of medical technology, people would have ephemeral.

19.    Students pursue a great academic achievement while studying at university.

20.    Some high school leavers succeed with their own fashion venture.

21.    Gap year make students to feel severance from the strict high schools schedule.

22.    Should students never have a chance to experience the real working environment, they might disenchant of their work after graduate the university. For this reason, students better experience the career they choose before start study that subject. This is because academic theories and real working are absolutely different.

23.    Students should resolve whether or not taking a gap year.

24.    After doing a gap year, it is difficult for student to recommence their study at school.

25.    I strongly disapprove of this opinion for the following reasons.

26.    Closely looking at this justification will help us to understand this concern at hand.

27.    Students often do not have an impartial view of their teachers.

28.    My stance in this debate are clear, students should eval‎uate their teachers in order for teachers to correct their mistake. 

29.    In order to succeed in one area, people should to devote their time and energy in it.

30.    Parents should commit their time to communicate with their children in order to reduce the conflicts.

31.    There is an apparent reason why students should not make a judgment of their teachers.

32.    Both students and teachers should make punctuality.

33.    Teachers should write legibility on the board.

34.    Teacher also have chance to reflect on their teaching methods and improve it.

35.    Some teachers speak erroneous accent so that students cannot correctly understand teacher.

36.    Students should sensibly criticize teachers instead of making joke of it.

37.    Should students have authority to judge teachers qualification, teacher’s reputation in school could be powerless.

[Kiwi Check.]

1. Such a phenomenon is believed to result to both merits and demerits, which this essay will explore.
2. Studying at primary schools provide better quality of education as well as equip with advanced facilities so that students often outperform students in public schools.
3. Private schools usually impart distinctive education format, for instance, small group studying, and various leisure activities (swimming, hocking).

[Kiwi Check.]

4. Schools assist students to formulate their future career.
5. Private schools often hire highly qualified teachers so they ensure student’s academic consolidation.
6. Wearing school uniforms make students to lose personal identity as it emphasizes student’s homogeneity.
7. Private schools not only concentrate on teaching academic subjects, but also morality as a major subjects which help students to grow up as a courteous individual.

[Kiwi Check.]

8. Poor students are rejected by the private schools because of its exorbitantly high education costs.
9. There are several ways to get out of these quandaries.
10. Gap year allow students to obtain important life experience which they cannot learn from normal education.
11. Such work experience acquired from gap year will play an integral role when they are going to look for a job.

[Kiwi Check.]

12. In order for students to have a gap year, they need to postpone university course for one year.
13. We all know that most young and innocent adolescents cannot make a sensible judgment, so they are more likely to waste their valuable time while they are doing the gap year.
14. Animal testing is ruthless for innocent animals.

[Kiwi Check.]

15. Without experiencing a gap year, students might be demoralized after graduating from the university as they never have the chance to experience a real society.
16. Gap years allow students to find out personal affection and strongpoint which help them to decide a major they are going to study.
17. Students can discover what their real affinity is.

[Kiwi Check.]

18. Without the advancement of medical technology, people would have ephemeral.
19. Students pursue a great academic achievement while studying at university.
20. Some high school leavers succeed with their own fashion venture.
21. Gap year make students to feel severance from the strict high schools schedule.

[Kiwi Check.]

22. Should students never have a chance to experience the real working environment, they might be disenchanted of their work after graduating from the university. For this reason, students better experience the career they choose before starting to study that subject. This is because academic theories and real working are absolutely different.

[Kiwi Check.]

23. Students should resolve whether or not to take a gap year.
24. After doing a gap year, it is difficult for student to recommence their study at school.
25. I strongly disapprove of this opinion for the following reasons.
26. Closely looking at this justification will help us to understand this concern at hand.
27. Students often do not have an impartial view of their teachers.

[Kiwi Check.]

28. My stance in this debate are clear, students should evaluate their teachers in order for teachers to correct their mistake.
29. In order to succeed in one area, people should devote their time and energy in it.
30. Parents should commit their time to communicate with their children in order to reduce conflicts

[Kiwi Check.]

31. There is an apparent reason why students should not make a judgment of their teachers.
32. Both students and teachers should make punctuality.
33. Teachers should write legibility on the board.
34. Teacher also have chance to reflect on their teaching methods and improve it.
35. Some teachers speak erroneous accent so that students cannot correctly understand teacher.

[Kiwi Check.]

36. Students should sensibly criticize teachers instead of making joke of it.
37. Should students have the authority to judge teachers qualification, teacher’s reputation in school could be powerless.