※ 김민형 (여수 도원초등학교, 3학년) 선정되신 분들께 축하 드립니다. 영어일기는 9월 첫째주부터 ‘영어일기’ 코너는 새로운 선발자의 글들로 운영될 것입니다.
* 선발되신분들의 영어일기와 리틀팍스 회원들에게 보내는 편지는 9월 1일 발표됩니다.
9월 첫째 주의 영어일기는 메일로 보내주신 영어일기를 첨삭하여 사이트에 발표되니 참고해 주시기 바랍니다. * 한 학기 동안 성실하고 책임감 있는 자세로 꾸준히 영어일기를 작성해 주시기 바랍니다. Followings are the letters I sent.
July 27th 2009, Mon Last Friday, I went to Im-ja-do with my family. I was too boring when I got on the car. It took 3 and half hours to get there from Yeo su. The first thing I did in Im-ja-do was eating dinner and set the tent. And the next day I played in the water all day long. My sister and my cousin sister and I played tag in the water with my big uncle. My big uncle said, if I and my sisters catch him he will buy us ice creams! And we played tag for 2 hours!!! And he gave up and he bought us ice cream! In the evening we caught some crabs. There were so many holes. The crabs were wondering in the sea. When I tried to get them they run. And I got just 2 crabs. It was very funny camping and I really want to go there again! To. Little Fox friends ! I am Spongebob and 3rd grader. I am so happy to write this letter for you. I live a small city called Yeo su where 2012 EXPO will be held. I know you guys study English hard like me. In the first time it was boring to learn English but after practicing hard I became fluent and I began to like English. Nowadays I study English with Little Fox like this. First I listen the story and second I summarized the story and last I talk it with my father. This helps me to learn English easier. I think the best way to learn English is study hard. For example, read many English books and watching Little Fox story every day etc. Thank you for reading such a long story and last I hope you guys become fluent in English ! Fm. Spongebob.
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출처: 영어야 놀자 원문보기 글쓴이: Charlie
첫댓글 축하합니다... 나보다 잘하네 ㅎㅎㅎㅎ
감사합니다 ^^ 패커님,,
우와~~~ 민형이 대단해요!!
감사^^ 형찬이는 나중에 더 잘하겠지요. 엄마가 도와줄텐데,,
초등학교 3학년의 솜씨라고 믿기지 않을 정도로 대단하네요~~멋져라~~^^
감사^^ 잘 지내는듯하여 반갑네요.