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Topic 41: Today, people are getting greedy and selfish. Some people argue that we should go back to the old days, and show respect for the family and community, so that we can make the world a better place to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 

1. Most modern people tend to be self-centred.(selfish)

2. In the company, people make many cliques and support only their faction.

3. Together with increasing competition thesedays, people become more egoistic than bygone time.

4. In the pat time, there are numerous touchable happening among people.

5. However, these days people try to obtain only their interest.

6. In the onetime, people always take the good of the community into consideration, which considerably promoted society.

7. Should some behavior cause some buzz in the community, it would be prohibited.

8. In contrast, these days people tend to be cajoled by attractive personal profit, rather than public one.

9. Some people ploughed their money back the society, which is cursory investment.

10. Since life is so transient that we should enjoy happy life with family and neighbors

11. Moreover, we always have some possibility to fall into unprepared emergency situation.

12. Selfish atmosphere make people bystanders about other's problem.

13. For this reason, we have to restructure social unity.

14. We have to change people from onlooker to associate. 

[Kiwi Check.]

1. Most modern people tend to be self-centered.
2. In the company, people make many cliques and support only their faction.
3. Together with increasing competition these days, people become more egoistic than bygone time.
4. In the <<pat time,>> <<What is pat time???>> there are numerous touchable happening among people.

[Kiwi Check.]

5. However, these days people try to obtain only their interest.
6. In the onetime, people always take the good of the community into consideration, which considerably promoted society.
7. Should some behavior cause some buzz in the community, it would be prohibited.
8. In contrast, these days, people tend to be cajoled by attractive personal profit, rather than public one.

[Kiwi Check.]

9. Some people ploughed their money back into the society, which is cursory investment.
10. Since life is so transient that we should enjoy happy life with family and neighbors
11. Moreover, we always have some possibility to fall into unprepared emergency situation.
12. Selfish atmosphere make people to be bystanders about other's problem.
13. For this reason, we have to restructure social unity.
14. We have to change people from onlookers to associates.