<P sab="13581"> It is quite difficult for government not only to save environment but also to develop it. Some people might agree with the opinion that government need to protect environment for our future; nevertheless, others might hold their opinion that it is necessary to develop environment for development of regions. In line with this, I concretely believe that environment should be saved concerning two aspects: uncommon natural phenomena and importance of beings.</P>
<P sab="13582"> To begin with, many uncommon natural phenomena threaten our lives nowadays. In fact, they usually occur due to destrction of enviroment. Although it is probable that many people may cast doubt to my opinion; however, many ecologists have insisted that natural situation will be aggrevated unless government try to save environment. According to news, a number of ecologists claimed the ice in Antractic will be melted up and typhoons and hurricanes will become stronger in one hundred years. This event definitely shows that government should concentrate on saving environment rather than making developments for our survival.</P>
<P sab="13583"> Furthermore, many lives are damaged during developing environment. Without green nature, no human beings can survive. Some people might take lives for granted, it is not true to me. Actually, every life is interconnected to each other so tightly. To give a specific example, seemingly-unimportant grass is eaten by horses, and human beings have beef dishes for meals. Consequently, human beings rely on grass indirectly. Thus, if there is not grass, human beings are not able to survive. This incident absolutely indicates that all lives in the Earh are very valuable.</P>
<P sab="13584"> To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, it is necessary for goverment to conservate nature for the ever-lasting peace in the Earth. Of course, development is somtimes needed for higher level of living. However, there should be the fact that if we do not protect environment, we may die before enjoying that higher level of living.</P>
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첫댓글선생님 죄송합니다. 어제 올리려 했는데 인터넷에 문제가 생기는 바람에 올리지 못했습니다. 지금 막 고쳐 올렸습니다.^^ 아 그리고 저는 금요일 내지 토요일까지가 좋다고 생각하는데 다른 요일에도 물론 괜찮으니 선생님 바쁘지 않으신 시간 말씀하신다면 그 때 올리도록 하겠습니다..
첫댓글 선생님 죄송합니다.
어제 올리려 했는데 인터넷에 문제가 생기는 바람에 올리지 못했습니다.
지금 막 고쳐 올렸습니다.^^
아 그리고 저는 금요일 내지 토요일까지가 좋다고 생각하는데
다른 요일에도 물론 괜찮으니
선생님 바쁘지 않으신 시간 말씀하신다면 그 때 올리도록 하겠습니다..
금요일과 토요일중에 올려라...그게 좋겠다...그리고 원래 내가 문제를 준 내용에 답글형식으로 달아라...그래야 나중에 history를 금방 찾을 수 있다...지금것은 그냥해도 된다...홧팅...
네 지금처럼 앞으로도 답글 형식으로 쓰면 되는 것이죠?
또 '지금것은 그냥해도 된다'가 무슨 말씀인지 잘 모르겠습니다..^^
지금처럼 원래 내가 올린 내용에 답글형식으로 계속해서 리플을 달면된다는 얘기다...홧팅...첨삭은 충분히 너를 분석해서 도래하는 숙제날전에 올려진다...홧팅...
그리고 내가 올린 내용의 글을 읽었다면 읽었다 라든지 아님 답글을 짧게 써주면 너와 내가 의사소통이 이루어짐을 알수있다...또한 내 보물창고에 가서 스피킹 답안도 시간될때마다 프린트해서 읽도록 해라...논리력을 쌓을때 도움이 될것이다...홧팅...
네..