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Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
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Whether studying alone or studying with a group of students becomes an interesting issue among people. The choice could be made in diverse ways. As for me I am of the opnion that students should study with a group of students. There are two reasons that make my view convincing. This is because you can get information from them about the subjects and others can encourage you when you are slump.
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First, you can get information from a group of student. For example, when I study the english literature in the university, I make the team which are composed of three members. We divide literature into three parts and study respective area. After one weeks later we explain each parts. so, we can get many information from them abour my subjects.
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Second, others can encourage you when you are slump and you can efficiently study because of competition. For instance, when I studied electric circuit in the freshman, I was depressed because of difficulty of circuit. But my friend encourage me to study very hard and I can pass the electrical theory exam. Otherwise, we can efficiently study by competition. Hense, cooperation of team member helps you to study more easily.
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In conclusion, I prefer to study with a group of students because we can gain many informations each other and we can rely on our peer each other.
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첫댓글 Wow, very well organized essay.however, there are simple mistakes.informations(x)encourage=>>encourages or encouraged.good job^^
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