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Topic10 도시에 존재하는 문제: While people flood into big cities to seek jobs and happy life, there is a trendency for people to move out. WHat problems do big cities have?

Annually, many people are crowded into cities to find jobs and mice life that can help people to get stimulated. According to the research, the population of Shanghai increased 26% during recent 3 years. However, as the rise of urban population, many problems are apperating in cities.

Job seekers crowd into cities yearly to find the perfect job and help them get started in life. Research shows that Shanghai’s population rose to 26% in 3 years, and with it are various problems.

Most serious problem is rising stress caused by chaotic places. As more and more people flood into cities, city service facilites are already over he critical point. In cities, not onlyu traffic and housing but also education, sanitatioin, and employment is making a lot of problems.

Serious problems such as high level of stress are caused by traffic, strict education system, cleanliness and employment. Moreover, as people flock into cities, the city’s services are overused and are already reaching their critical levels.

Second problem is physical environment problem. Because people of cities are living in big apartment, they have lack of chance to see sunshine, trees, and grass. People feel resentment at living in the concrete cement, neon sign and traggic jams. On the other side, as the grwoth of public transportation, the exhuast that the traffic genereated made the air unbreathable.

Also, when it comes to environmental problems, people do not feel comfortable living in concrete houses. They are deprived from seeing the beautiful nature which consists of trees, the sun and the grass. In addition, due to the increasing number of cars, it makes the quality of air poor and worse, unsafe to breathe in.

However, the most serious and urgent problem is widespread crime. The bank robbery that was hard to hear in past is now occuring constantly. News are full of robbery, kidnap, and murder. Thesedays, even in daylight, we have to alert of any dangers, so late night is very dangerous.

The most serious and alarming problem people are facing is criminality. Bank robberies which were not common in the past are now frequently occurring. These days, not only nights are dangerous but also days. People must be alert at all times of the day.

Because of these problem, cities can’t attravt many people like before. People are moving to places around the cities. If there’s no improvement, more people will move out of the cities.

With these problems, many cities can no longer attract people to live there for good. If there will be no positive changes, people will leave cities.

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