정혜민 Compare to the people living in the cities, the people living in the rural areas can take better care of their (families or) children.

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Compare to the people living in the cities, the people living in the rural areas can take better care of their (families or) children.

Over the past few decades, people have argued that rural people can have more advantages than cities people. Some people think who living in the rural areas can take better care of their families. This is because, rural areas provides fresh environment to be healthy and to experience the real nature. Also, rural areas people are warmhearted that people always prepared to help other neighbors or visitors. Nevertheless, others do not agree with some people’s argument. However, I am strongly convinced that people who are living in the cities can take more advantages. Actually, I have two specific reasons to strengthen my idea. I will clearly show and develop my personal opinion as specifically as I can in the next following paragraphs: developed in facilities and more opportunities provided.

To begin with, cities provide people to use or have much higher quality of facilities in opened areas or buildings.  Some people who encourage rural people have some negative effects. If people live in the rural areas, they will use old and broken facilities that have been used for long time. You can notice when you visit rural areas that they do not change their facilities frequently, maybe, in my opinion, they do not have enough money to spend to change their old facilities. On the other hand, if people live in the cities, they will have great facilities that have given by institutions, mostly in schools for students to encourage to work or study hard. To tell one of my stories as an example of this, when I was young, I have lived in the rural area called Busan. In Busan, I was going to the old school that might have been 100 years since the school established. Of course, the facilities are in very bad condition that hard to use continuously. Also, there were no opportunities to learn other extra things that have provided in the cities school because there were not enough teachers to teach other things to children. Opportunely, my father moved his work place to the city called Seoul. When I got to the Seoul, I have noticed that the facilities were almost new and many students are gathered in there to get more opportunities to success. After I have transferred my school, I was able to use great facilities that have developed well. If I had just stayed in the rural areas, I could not have any lucky to use high quality of facilities and view or experience wide world that lead me to success.

Moreover, cities have more opportunity to learn or get works that helps people to success in their life. Some might think that living in the rural areas can provide more opportunities to people, because there is only few people live. However, it is more convince that cities have more opportunities to take since cities have most of companies, institutions, or organizations that gives people to meet opportunities in wide range. In fact, Korean Statistical Center in South Korea, conducted a research on the national students and parents about a thousand in every areas. The research clearly demonstrated the fact that living in the cities is a very good things to educate themselves and good things for even an old people to live because many institutions can help them. This clearly shows that people are better to live in the cities no matter what age they have.

To summarize, the point made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that people should not live in the rural area because they do not provide any opportunities to do new things and any facilities that can help students to learn in.

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