[Daily Writing-17] Environmental problems

[cello]

Q: The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent you agree with or disagree?

Over the past few decades, lots of industries have developed very quickly. It brought not only convenience to people’s lives but also environmental pollution. Therefore, people have begun to worry about our environment, especially air pollution. Some people suggest that the cost of fuel should be increased to reduce the use of it. However, I am not in favor of this idea. There are some reasons that I disagree.

To begin with, increasing the cost of fuel would threaten the world economy. The world economic system is related to the cost of fuel, especially oil. So, if the fuel price rises up, the world economic system would be attacked. We experienced that the world economy became frozen because of high oil price in the 1970s. Therefore, it is really a dangerous idea to increase the cost of fuel.

Second, .the use of natural sources such as gas, oil and coal is necessary to live even though these fuels cause environmental problem. People are already accustomed to convenience brought about by industrialization. Many inventions that bring people comfort cannot help using fuels. If the government prohibits using fuel or increases the price of fuel to limit its use, there will be lots of complaints or even riots; people will strike or demonstrate against the government

To sum up, it is not a good solution to reduce air pollution by raising up the cost of fuel because people heavily rely on fuel, and fuel price has a close relationship with the world economic system. We must find out more efficient solutions such as inventing

alternative energy. (264 words)

[무영랑]

Thanks a lot.

[susankmh]

감사합니다

[은혜]

고맙습니다.

[sunssa]

첼로님 너무 감사합니다. 열공할께요...

[jjjj]

감사합니다.

[nessa]

정말 감사합니다

[찰리B]

잘 봤습니다~

[great ky]

첼로님 너무 갑사합니다...

[해진이]

Thanks a lot^^

[눈앞의마시멜로]

너무 감사해요. 문장의 흐름들이 참 편안하게 전개되는것 같아요.

[약관3]

many inventions that bring people comfort cannot help using fuel ->> 잘이해해가 안되는뎅.....

[지리산 벤쿠버]

사람들에게 편안함을 가져다준 많은 발견도 연료 사용을 중지 할수 업다... 한국말로 잘 표현 못하겠는데..대충 이런식으로 하면 될꺼 같습니다...^^: 제 의견상...

[오션]

잘 보고있습니다. 감사~.많은 발명품들이 연료사용을 하지않고는 편안함을 줄수없다. 고로, 연료를 사용해야만 편리하게 쓸수있다라는 뜻 아닐까요.

[great ky]

감사합니다..

[힘들지만열심히하하하]

thanks

[쥬피터]

thanks a lot