Re:문장 10개랑 단어 20개 올렸습니다. 영작 수정 부탁드려염^^

[minil]

님이 쓰신글을 이해하는데 어려운면이 없지않아 좀 있었구요. 한 문장에 여러 단어들이 서로 연결되지 않은 부분이 있었습니다. 단어의 뜻은 정확하지만 내용상 안어울리는 단어들이나...또 전혀 상반되는 뜻을 가진 단어도 있었습니다. 예를들어 "죄와벌" 을 표현할때 벌은 punishment 지 bee (동물), 그리고 참회 (attandance), (collar strip) 은 옷과 관련 .사전 보실때 신경쓰세요. 그래도 나름대로 잘 하셨네요. On the other hand 와 같은 transition 사용은 좋습니다..아~ 그리고 저는 이영화에 대해 전혀 모릅니다...

The Scarlet letter에는 4명의 주요 인물들이 등장하는데 호손은 이 인물들을 통해 작품의 내면과 그 작품이 상징하는 바를 보여주고 있다.
The four masters appear to The Scarlet letter and Hawthorne is showing that inside and symbolize of the work through these persons.
(In the film of the "Scarlet Letter," there are four main characters making their appearance. The director Nathaniel Hawthorne tries to show an inner aspects and the representations this piece of production makes through these four characters.

평생 동안 간통과 이단의 상징인 주홍글씨를 달고 살아야 하면서도 끝까지 목사를 믿고 사랑하는 Hester Prynne과 Hester를 사랑하면서 죄의식을 느끼고 성직자와 인간 사이에서 번뇌하는 Dimmesdale 목사, 그리고 Hester에게 집착하고 끈질기게 복수를 꿈꾸는 Hester의 전남편 Roger Chillingworth, Hester와 Dimmesdale간의 부정의 씨앗으로 등장하는 Pearl이 바로 그 주요 인물들이다.
Hester Prynne who though live scarlet letter that is adultery and unorthodox symbol for a whole life, she trust a pastor to end and a Dimmesdale pastor who is loving Hester and feel sense of guilt and is in agony between churchman and human, and Hester's former husband Roger Chillingworth that yearn to Hester and dreams revenge indefatigably, Pearl that appear by illegal seeds between Hester and Dimmesdale is justly masters.
(Hester Prynne is a character who trusts and loves the pastor all the way even though she has to live a life with a scarlet letter on her that symbolizes an adultery and paganism. The paster Dimmesdale plays a character who loves Hester even though feel the sense of guilt and feeling of an agony between churchman and human. Roger Chillingworth, a formal husband of Hester plays a character who is attached to Hester and has a dream in an attempts to seek for revenge. Pearl is a character who appears in this film as a seeds of being an improper.)

이 주요 인물 4명은 작가에 의해 놀라울 정도로 섬세하게 묘사되어 인간의 위선을 비웃기도 하고 죄와 벌, 사랑, 구원 등 인간에게 주어지는 비극을 상징하기도 한다.
4 masters laugh at human's hypocrisy because is described surprisingly delicately by writer and symbolize tragedy given to crime and bee, love, bent back human.
(The writer in this film does an excellent job of depicting four main characters surprisingly in delicate ways. The writer portrays these chararacters as a representation of a tragedy for sin and punishment, love, and redemption along with laughing at human's hypocrisy.)

이 소설의 내용은 죄를 중심으로 하여 주인공들의 심리를 묘사하고 있는데, 그 죄는 크게 세가
지 측면에서 살펴 볼 수 있다.
Contents of this novel are describing mind of masters centering crime, the crime can observe in greatly three side.
(This novel unfolds a story that has a basis on the sin by describing main character's mental state. The meaning of a sin can be seen from three different perspectives.)

세상에 드러난 Hester의 죄, 그리고 세상에 드러나지 않은 Dimmesdale 목사의 죄, 마지막으로 도저히 용서 받지 못할 Hester의 전남편 Roger Chillingworth죄이다.
It is that Hester's crime detected in the world, and Dimmesdale pastor's crime who is not detected in the world, finally, Hester's former husband Roger Chillingworth crime that is not forgiven at all.
(They are Hester's sin that is revealed ourside to the world, the pastor Dimmesdale's hidden sin that is not revealed, and an unforgiven sin that was committed by Roger Chillingworth.)

그 당시 결혼한 여자와 엄격한 도덕주의를 요구하는 청교도 목사의 사랑은 도저히 용납될 수 없는 것임에도 불구하고 Hester와 Dimmesdale 목사는 사랑에 빠지게 된다.
At that time, Hester and a Dimmesdale pastor shall fall in love in spite of that Puritan pastor's love who require moralism which is strict with woman who get married can not be tolerated at all.
(Hester and Dimmesdale falls in love despite the fact that Hester was about to get married and that Puritan minister's intolerant behavior of falling in love who is supposed to maintain and enforce moralism.)

결국 Hester는 간통죄로 가슴에 간통죄인임을 표시하는 ‘A’라는 글자를 새기고 살게 되는데, 여주인공 Hester가 평생 그녀의 가슴에 달고 다녀야 하는 주홍글씨 A는 ‘adultery’의 첫 글자로서 ‘간음’이라는 뜻이다.
Finally, Hester is engraved letter 'A' that mark adultery guilty person in chest by adultery and lives, scarlet letter A that heroine Hester must go attaching whole life in her chest is intent called 'Adultery' as initial of 'Adultery'.
(Consequently, Hester must live a life by engraving a letter "A" on her chest to show that she is a sinner of committing an adultry. The letter "A' in this film is a symbolic meaning of an adultry.)

Hester는 죄의 대가로 ‘A’자를 달고 다녔지만 당시를 지배하던 청교도주의에 당당히 맞서면서 살아간다.
Live defying proudly in Puritanism which control party principle although Hester went hanging 'A' thing into cost of crime.
(Hester lives a life by fighting against the Puritanism which ruled the world of religion at that time although she had to live by engraving a letter "A" on her as a punishment.)

결국 Hester의 끈기 있는 참회의 의지에 의해 이 글자는 ‘Able’의 A로, 더 나아가 ‘Angel’의 A자로 의미가 변화하기에 이른다.
Finally, this letter is 'Able''s A by Hester's will of inexhaustible attendance, arrive as 'Angel''s A magnetic path meaning changes furthermore.
(Throughout the story, the meaning of a letter "A" which represented for an adultry changes to the word "Able" and "Angel" due to Hester's unstopping will of being penitential person.)

그로부터 7년 뒤, Hester가 교수대에 섰던 바로 그 자리에서 Dimmesdale 목사는 마을 축제를 시작하는 설교를 한다.
After 7 years from that moment, a Dimmesdale pastor preaches that begin village banking in the seat that Hester stood in gallows.
(After seven years has passed, the pastor Dimmesdale begins his preaching for the villiage festival by standing on gallows where Hester used to stand.)

그리고 설교를 마친 Dimmesdale 목사는 갑자기 Hester와 그녀의 딸 Pearl을 부르며 바로 자신이 그 상대라고 외치고는 양심의 가책 속에 살아온 자신의 죄를 고백한 뒤 숨을 거둔다.
And die after confess own crime that live in agenbite of inwit even if shout that a Dimmesdale pastor who finish sermon calls Hester and her daughter Pearl suddenly and Ready front confidence is the companion.
(The pastor Dimmesdale dies after making a confession of his sin by blaming himself based on his conscience by shouting Hester and Pearl's name.)

한편, Dimmesdale의 고백을 필사적으로 저지하려는 Chillingworth도 급격히 몸이 쇠약해져서 1년도 못가서 죽는다.
On the other hand, Chillingworth to hinder Dimmesdale's confession frantically dies because body sinks and does not pass 1 year rapidly.
(On the other hand, Chillingworth who tries to hinder Dimmesdale from making a confession dies before passing a year due to rapidly weakening body.)

그 당시 사회적인 측면으로 봤을 때 Hester와 Dimmesdale의 진실 된 사랑은 사회로부터 외면 당했지만 독자들은 그들의 사랑이 얼마나 위대한지, 또한 그들의 죄는 결코 부정적인 죄가 아니라는 것을 알 수 있다.
At that time, when saw as social side, love which is true of Hester and Dimmesdale encountered outward appearance from society, but readers can know that that their love is how great and their crime is never contradictory crime.
(By looking at this problem based on social perspective, the readers knows that how great their love is and by acknowledging that a sin committed by them was not improper for the love Hester and Dimmesdale had.)

하지만 Chillingworth는 당시 사람들에게 동정을 얻었을지는 몰라도, 독자에게는 Hester를 진정으로 사랑해서 그녀의 곁에 있고 싶은 것보다는 질투에 눈이 먼 한 사나이로 밖에 보이지 않았을 것이다.
However, even if Chillingworth might get a collar strip to people at that time, might not have been seen out by a man who is blind in jealousy than want to love Hester sincerely to reader and be aside her.
(Although Chillingworth might received sympathies from the people yet, I am certain the audiences would have a different point of view by looking at Chillingworth as a man who is blind with a jealousy than wanting to be with her by loving her.)

이 소설에서 Pearl과 ‘A’자는 둘 다 죄를 상징하면서도 기능이 다르다는 것을 알 수 있다.
In this novel Pearl and 'A' that that function differs symbolizing crime know can .
(In this novel, the word "Pearl" and a letter "A" both is used to represent sin yet it is meant in a different way.)

‘A'자는 청교도적인 도덕관에 의해 그녀에게 주어진 죄의 상징이지만, 이것은 오히려 교만과 반항심을 유발하게 된다.
'A' that although it is symbol of crime given to her by puritanical moral this preferably haughtiness and spirit of insubordination cause .
(The letter "A" is a symbolic meaning of a sin that was given to her under the moralism from the puritanical point of view. Instead however, this induces an arrogance and hostility.)

하지만 Pearl은 그녀에게 사랑과 구원의 상징이다.
However, Pearl is symbol of love and eternity to her.
(However, the word "Pearl" is a symbolic meaning of love and redemption for her.)

Pearl은 죄의 씨앗이 아니라, 진정한 사랑의 결실이라고 할 수 있다.
Pearl is not seeds of crime, and can speak that it is bearing fruit of true love.
(Pear is not a seeds of sin, but it is bearing fruit of true love.)

이처럼 17세기 보스턴을 배경으로 쓰여진 주홍글씨의 작가 호손은 이 책을 통해서 그 당시의 청교도 사상을 비판하고 있다.
Writer Hawthorne of scarlet letter used with such 17th century Boston is criticizing Puritan thought at that time through this book.
(The writer of the "Scarlet Letter" Hawthorne is criticizing the Puritanism through this book that took in the seventeenth century in Boson.)

그 당시는 남성중심주의 사회였기 때문에 Herster의 전후 사정이나 상황은 눈여겨 보지도 않고, 모든 사람들은 그녀의 간음죄를 비난하며 그 죄에 대한 심판에만 관심을 가졌으나, 사회가 변화할수록 여성의 권한과 지위 또한 높아졌기 때문에 만약 현재 시대에서 Hester의 간음죄를 심판한다면 어쩜 그 심판하는 것 자체가 우스울 수도 있을 것이다.
At that time, because was androcentrism society, Herster's before and behind situation or circumstance does not observe carefully and everybody blames her adultery and was interested in judgment about only crime, but it may may be funny how if woman's authority and position judge Hester's adultery on present age because also rose as circle alters that judge itself.
(At that time, people in an androcentric society did not pay attention to the process of what happened before and after to Herster to make a decision of whether she was guilty or not. Instead, they criticized Herster for committing an adultry by making a hasty judegement. However, as time passed by, the women's authority and status were ascended. If we enounter a problem similar to Hesters' in the present life, then I assume that it might be just too funny for making a judgement like what happened to her.)

나는 이 작품 속에 낭만주의 경향이 내포되어 있음을 느낄 수 있었다.
I could feel within this work that romanticism inclination was contained.
(Through this piece of work, I can feel that romaticism inclination was contained within this work.)

왜냐하면 당시의 엄격한 청교도적인 규범과 이성을 따진다면 상상조차 할 수 없는 남녀 간의 사랑을 다루고 있기 때문이다.
Because is dealing with love between man and woman which do not even imagine if distinguish then strict puritanical rule and reason .
(Because this story is dealing with a love that is almost impossible to happen between man and woman by considering the strictness and norm existed at that time during the Puritanism era.)

그리고 여자를 포함한 모든 사람들에게 혹독한 비난을 받았음에도 불구하고 Hester는 인간의 가장 커다란 죄악은 위선이라고 고발하면서 자신의 죄를 드러내고 진정으로 참회하는 모습을 보여줬는데, 그런 그녀의 삶에 올바른 인간의 길이 있다는 가르침을 받을 수 있었다.
And Hester exposes own crime and showed sincerely attended image prosecuting that human's biggest crime is hypocrisy despite got severe criticism to everybody including woman, could take teaching that there is right human's way in such her life.
(Hester showed us the true outward appearance by making a honest confession by exposing her sin by saying that the biggest sin that human can committ is a sin of hypocrisy although she received harsh criticisms from everybody including women. Based on the way of how she lived her life taught me a lesson about what is a proper ways to live a human life.)

[정서니]

미닐님.. 정말루 감사합니다. 제가 너무 어렵게 생각 한거 같아요. 미닐님께서 너무 힘드셨겠어요..ㅠㅠ 죄송하구요~ 너무너무 감사합니다. 미닐님.. 항상 행복하세요^*^

[zem^^]

thanks, minil^^ have a pleasant weekend!